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10-18-2010, 07:00 PM
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RE: Verse
Nice, I like that. It's like the pop rock Bon Jovi "Have a Nice Day!" but a little more cynical.
How about... "If you choose not to decide you still have made a choice." I love that deep stuff... |
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10-18-2010, 08:44 PM
Post: #32
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RE: Verse
Whoa - memories there Vincent!
I am currently trying to figure out how to write a pantoum. They fascinate the heck outta me for some reason. Just the rythm and movement attracts me, and I have absolutely no idea why. Of course, there is one on Snakes & Arrows, but its deeper than that. To me they are a bit like haikus, only haikus can be awful vague and undescriptive. A pantoum has a movement about it. I wonder if there are any good books on writing things like that, because thats something that intrigues both my 16 year old and I. My wife says "And you ride a Harley?" Talk about a critic!!! For You Steve & Monica - Your Love will forever shine on in our hearts!!! ![[Image: monicasteve.jpg]](http://i1120.photobucket.com/albums/l498/boomer1964/Canada/monicasteve.jpg)
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10-18-2010, 08:52 PM
Post: #33
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RE: Verse
We could just walk aimlessly in a public swimming pool and scream "Marco polo" if that would help?
Don't talk smack about Total!! |
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10-19-2010, 04:06 AM
Post: #34
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Quote:We could just walk aimlessly in a public swimming pool and scream "Marco polo" if that would help?-------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Is this a game? When we were in Australia some kids kept singing out, "Marco" and the others would respond "Polo" while thye were in the swimming pool - all very odd! |
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10-19-2010, 06:27 AM
Post: #35
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RE: Verse
I am suddenly haunted with scenes from "Wild Hogs"......ICK!
For You Steve & Monica - Your Love will forever shine on in our hearts!!!
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10-19-2010, 07:04 PM
Post: #36
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RE: Verse
Has anyone ever checked out Geddy's solo album. He writes some brilliant lyrics as well.
"I watch the sea, it helps to anchor me" "I watch TV, whaddaya want from me?" |
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10-19-2010, 07:27 PM
Post: #37
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RE: Verse
A Martian haiku:
"Red sand between my toes Summer vacation in outer space" Robin Williams You signed the contract - you must do my bidding ![[Image: diapo9dbfe18481fdebf8720fefa4ec4756.gif]](http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd103/laserspray/internet%20stuff/smilies/diapo9dbfe18481fdebf8720fefa4ec4756.gif)
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10-19-2010, 08:01 PM
Post: #38
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RE: Verse
(10-19-2010 06:27 AM)boomer Wrote: I am suddenly haunted with scenes from "Wild Hogs"......ICK! Just trying to help with your self repeating pantoum. Marco. Polo. Marco........ Don't talk smack about Total!! |
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10-19-2010, 08:05 PM
Post: #39
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RE: Verse
That doesn't help. In fact, its giving me frightmares!
For You Steve & Monica - Your Love will forever shine on in our hearts!!!
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10-19-2010, 08:11 PM
Post: #40
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RE: Verse
(10-19-2010 08:05 PM)boomer Wrote: That doesn't help. In fact, its giving me frightmares! Well fine! I'll just make my way over to another lil pool party then. This is no way to treat boys I tell ya Don't talk smack about Total!! |
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